Kia Ora! My name is Maddison I am a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School!
WOW I love how you are doing this on a topic that is relevant and that it includes people from New Zealand and it also teaches people that don't live in New Zealand about us.
ALthough I love this blog post I think a good thing to do is make it interesting and add in loads of colour to make it fun and new. I loved the infomation that you have shared but more colour would be a great place to improve.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful work! Kindest Regards! -Maddie
Kia Ora Faye,
ReplyDeleteI'm Grace from Yaldhurst Model School,
This is a great blog post.
I think this is very a good and that you explained this very very well,
This reminds me when I read something about the southern alps.
Maybe next time add some more pictures.
But apart from that its great
- Grace
Kia Ora!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison I am a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School!
WOW I love how you are doing this on a topic that is relevant and that it includes people from New Zealand and it also teaches people that don't live in New Zealand about us.
ALthough I love this blog post I think a good thing to do is make it interesting and add in loads of colour to make it fun and new. I loved the infomation that you have shared but more colour would be a great place to improve.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful work!
Kindest Regards!
-Maddie